Wednesday, July 9, 2008

When Your Dreaming With a Open Heart

Everything seems to go my way. haha iono lol im just loving the song When Your Dreaming With a Broken Heart - John Mayer. So basically right now im currently stuck on working on this poem. RAWR gets to me sometimes hehe but its all good. But lately the whole tragedy with Jenny, is well you can say still going on. She still gets occasional times when she feel like she has to puke, or faint or anything. -sigh- she found out what was wrong, and im trying to help her too, but iono if she is doing enough. All i can do is keep her positive and not thinking about it.
So on another subject, this Sunday Alvin and I are going to Lake Chabot to go take pictures, early morning to afternoon. Its going to be amazing. I cant wait, so many photos will be taken, and so many amazing photos shall be posted up here, and on out Deviant Arts =D
Oh yesterday i shall talk about. Yesterday i went to my friend Oddies house. Now that was FUN, cause o course she has a Wii, and Emma came over, so now with oddie, emma, oddies bro, cooking, and a Wii, thats crazy. It was a very fun time. haha Oddie is such a cluts, and a good chef (sike! haha) naw but she kept breaking the food >< lol

hmm lately my mind has been killing me over some past stuff affecting me to the current day. Its decisions i made, and how i chose to take certain ways. -sigh- i feel like its eating my heart away, and leaving me with nothing but a black hole. Some nights i think about it and just, become so cold over the past. But its the present, where i should be worrying about whats going on now, but then... i guess the past just comes back and hits me hard.


Here is what i have for my poem so far XP

It seems like your waiting for nothing, Looks like time has deleted it all
It may be that everything that could have been was thrown away
So take whats left, and dont somehow fill in the space
When i can see through it, i feel safe


Then im trying to work a way into the last lines of
"Its Miles back to you, but i still feel home is in your arms"

any comments? or even help on filling the gap would be kool =D

1 comment:

xKataklyzm said...

um
your.....i think you might mean "you're"
it seems like you're waiting for nothing, Looks like time has deleted it all
It may be that everything that could have been was thrown away
So take what's left and don't fill the gaps
When I can see through it, I feel safe
Though you may be out of reach
Warm feelings emanate,
Tragedy, war, strife, and fear
I'll rid them all to be in your arms
Cost is nothing, the distance is short
It's miles back to you, but I still feel home is in your arms.

hows that?